Show don't tell (maybe #2)

This is a show don't tell presentation. I really failed the 2nd Character, but my teacher came to the rescue and ended for me. 

The Great Wonders of the World!!!

Have you ever watched around the world in eighty days? Well, I went around the world in twenty minutes. we had a Google Expedition. We used Google cardboard. (Picture will be put in somewhere)

David Attenborough was the first person we met. Some of the boys thought he was a girl. He was in the Borneo rain forest. Did you know that the Borneo rain forest has an estimated age of 130 million years, making in the oldest rain forest in the world

We also went to Buckingham Palace where the queen lives.  Did you know that there are 1514 doors, 760 windows and the windows get washed every 6 weeks. Also their are more than 350 clocks in Buckingham.

If you have ever been to Rome you would see the Colosseum. They use to have gladiator fights to the death. Did you know that there are 36 trapdoors to show off special effects.  

I really liked using google cardboard and would like to use it again. After using it I felt dizzy and felt like puking but I didn’t puke. It also felt fun spinning on my bum and looking at the all the wonders of the world. If I could buy google cardboard for one dollar I would.

Coyote and the turtle.

This is from week 3. But I never got to finish. Now I have finished it.

Fair Chocolate #2 By Renata Hopkins

The Amazing Maze 'n Maize

WALT summarise and combine information from across multiple texts. 

What Teachers Do At Morning Tea

WALT: use the structure of newspaper articles to write news reports

What Teachers Do At Morning Tea In The Staffroom.

By Ava

At Point England School

At morning tea teachers go to the staffroom to listen to notices from Mr Burt.

Kids at Pt England have a good idea of what their teachers do at morning tea. Here is what some of them had to say. When interviewed Stacy, in year 5 said “I think they talk about the kids with their learning and  eat their lunch.” Cameo said “I think they interact with each other on how to make us better learners, so we can strive to succeed and be future focused learners.”

Teachers go to the staffroom at morning tea, so that they can listen to Mr Burt, the principal. They have to listen to him make important speeches and talk to the other teachers.

When Interviewed Miss King, a teacher at Pt England, said ”We make a cup of instant coffee and we sit down and we listen to Mr Burt talk.”

Teachers work really hard and probably can’t wait till the school holidays in October.

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