Nov Writing Test

This my writing test,

There once was a boy his name was Josh, he is 10 years old and he lived on a farm. Josh called for his dad, but there was no answer. Then he called for his dad again, but still no answer, then he heard a whisper saying  ‘‘help me sonnnnnn,” then it was gone.

That night he had a dream that his dad pulled a prank on him, and hissed “that there are no such things as ghost.”But josh yelled “ where have you been,” then his dad was gone. Josh ran and ran and ran till he woke up.

the next day, josh heard someone laughing in the attic. So he walked up the ladder, and saw his dad laughing. Josh said “where have you been i have been looking all over for you i thought you were died, ” and his dad said “ it was a prank.”

THE END

 
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The Hare and the Tortoise

Hi my name is larry the tortoise, and for a good reason. I am really slow and have a head like cabbage, and feet like Brussels sprouts.
While I was eating grass, Speedy, the hare, came. Then the fox pop up, and said “ I’ll lay a bet that the tortoise can beat you in a race.”and Speedy said “Pah! “I’ll beat that old tortoise over any distance, any day, any time.”


We were going on a race, up the hill and back again. At last the fox called out: “Ready, Steady Go !” Speedy hung around for a moment to see me lumber off the starting line, but I was taking so long about it that he  got bored and shot off towards the hill.


How did the fox ever think that I could win? When I got around the corner I saw Speedy sitting near a tree and having a nap.As I was winning, it was getting dark. I got to the finish line and won.were waiting for speedy but he was still a sleep.So i went home and went to sleep too.                 The moral of the story was slow and steady wins the race.