Ava The Detective

Last week I did a writing test, so just wait to see my edited work. 

Once upon a time there were a family that live in paris. They were great at many things.
There was a girl named Kaiah she was only 6 and she had two dogs. Then one dog disappeared. Then again, and then Kaiah disappeared.
The mum is named crissy. she cryed and cryed and cryed till she felt much better.