Nov Writing Test
This my writing test,
There once was a boy his name was Josh, he is 10 years old and he lived on a farm. Josh called for his dad, but there was no answer. Then he called for his dad again, but still no answer, then he heard a whisper saying ‘‘help me sonnnnnn,” then it was gone.
That night he had a dream that his dad pulled a prank on him, and hissed “that there are no such things as ghost.”But josh yelled “ where have you been,” then his dad was gone. Josh ran and ran and ran till he woke up.
the next day, josh heard someone laughing in the attic. So he walked up the ladder, and saw his dad laughing. Josh said “where have you been i have been looking all over for you i thought you were died, ” and his dad said “ it was a prank.”
THE END
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Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shanda Thornton. I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I am studying to become an Elementary teacher, hopefully for 5th grade! I am enrolled in a class called EDM310 and we are assigned to comment on blog post by students, that is what brings me to your page! I enjoyed your story! It was a writing test, right? Did you make up this story yourself? It is very creative! I liked 5th grade a lot when I was a younger student! I hope you are enjoying it! The other day I was on your blog and saw a post about your favorite artist! I like Bruno Mars too! He is pretty awesome! Well I hope you have a great year! This is a link to my BlogSpot, incase you would like to check it out!
www.thorntonshandaedm310.blogspot.com
Thanks Shanda !!
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DeleteHai Shanda, Thanks for commenting on my blog. I havent really been checking the comments. Im now Grade 8 and I will be in High school in 2017. Yes, I made the story up myself in 40 minutes. Thank you for checking out my blog. :) You can comment on more of my stuff if you would like. Thanks Ava!! :)
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